Any suggestions??

I know the baby's face is a little freaky, but it's still in progress.  I'm trying to go for like the typical busy woman dealing with everyday life.  This is only my first idea. I plan on working with some other ones, but this is the one I'm having trouble with.  I like the idea behind it so I'm looking for ways to make it successful.

Any preferences on type?? The very top and the very bottom are handwritten using the pencil and brush tool in illustrator.  The others are a variation of types I found that look like handwritten type. 

Necesito Ayuda........HEEELLPP!!

Okay so Ads....umm. I need suggestions. I have some ideas on what I want to do, but I'm having a problem translating them to the computer I feel like everything that I've done looks really.....I hate to say amateur, but that's the only word I can think of.  I am not sure whether to illustrate them which is what I'm interested in, but the way I've illustrated them up to this point is to draw them straight into illustrator using the pencil and pen tool. Does anyone have a better idea or way for me to try? Also my first thought was to use photography, but I am not sure if I'll be able to take pictures of what I want to communicate with my ads. I'll post what I have so far and I'm taking any opinions and suggestions!

Animation Experimentation

I saw other people doing animations so I thought I would take advantage of what I've been learning about flash to try one of my own.  It's really simple and quick, but I am learning as  I go.

Funny Ads

Would you really want to buy this toothpaste seeing that guy there?! lol

Found Ads....Some Good, Some Bad

A race to the finish

Working on fine tuning the last few things on my stationary. Still so many designs, but I think I know which direction I want to head in.

Animation for Drawing and Comp.

This is an animation I did for drawing and composition. We are working on this for at the same time, and I was thinking maybe this can help me develop further ideas when dealing with my client. This definitely has a more illustrative quality to it, and I'm not sure that it lends itself to the type of client that I'm dealing with, but even so it can help my creative juices continue to flow!!

I'm not sure why its going so slow, but you get the drift!